Saturday, June 24, 2017
100 Word Challenge prompt for this week
The interesting photograph used as a prompt led to a wide variety of responses from the children. Enjoy reading and please comment giving positive and useful feedback to the children.
Egg by Tom H
“Ahhhh we just found this egg finally after 12 WHOLE HOURS”!!!! said the Worker
“what the heck are we gonna do with it”?!?!?
“WHO CARES let’s just take it back to base”.
10 Hours later.... “Ahh we’re back home”! said Worker 1
“thanks men for getting the 10 foot tall chocolate egg back”! said the Leader “wait what the”!? “The chocolate eggs gone”!
“NOOOOOOOOOO”! said everybody.
Everybody felt fire anger and fury “OH NO WE WILL GET THAT EGG BACK”!!!!!!!!!!!! said captain Obvious. When they got back the egg was missing ⅓ of its shell and ½ of its yolk.
The Healing Powers by Oscar
One day, a huge egg dropped out of the sky. It seemed to say move or be crushed before it hit the ground and smashed. A week earlier a group of chemists had heard about the possibilities that this egg could heal anything and anyone that ate or touched its yolk or white. They had been waiting for this moment. They started to work immediately. They scooped up some of the important runny yolk, it smelt like boiled asphalt when suddenly BLAM! The yolk and whites shoot out and bury the chemists one yells “NO, this wasn't supposed to happen!” Then they die.
The Giant Egg by Caitlin
September 12 2018
The Egg of Bad Stuff by Lukas
Once there was a boy called Ghillie he was incredibly skinny. He was walking with his dad until they found a mutant chocolate egg, “ Omg that's a pretty big egg “ “ Yeah that is pretty big egg”, so Ghillie took a bite of it “this egg is good” suddenly ice water started pouring out of it and it formed an ice monster i shouldn't have done the ice bucket challenge. Were icicles yep we're definitely icicles the ice monster started chasing them they ran as fast as they could but the ice monster picked them up and ate them and died.
The Falling Egg by Charlie
One sunny day their was a boy called Josh. One day the boy was looking up at the sky for know reason when he saw a small blob of black in the sky he said to his friends“what is that” “probably”was just a bird” said his friend, josh was not convinced. next you knew there were hundreds of them more and more were falling people were screaming alien's invading others were yelling don't be stupid aliens do not exist. One fell to the ground and builders came just normal people that is very weird.
The mystery of the giant egg by Logan
One afternoon a boy in his the backyard. suddenly, he saw a big flash of light it looked like an asteroid. He rushed inside and told mom and dad they rang 911 for an appearance of an asteroid.” it landed somewhere in bangor maine on frash st. 2 hours later the police and scientists arrived at the scene. “It looks like a giant egg” scientist 1 said. “don't be ridiculous” said the police it took 2 days to fully eggsamen it. It was an egg and it hatched so something has been lurking around america.
The Giant Egg by Lyla
The builders were driving in their vehicles when one spotted a huge boulder. They needed it moving out of the way and they all agreed to blow it up.
“Fire the bomb”! Shouted the builder. “I want this boulder broken to pieces!
“Yes sir”. Shouted all the other builders.
BOOM! The air filled with the smell of chocolate.
The boulder was actually a giant chocolate egg! What a surprise!
The chocolate exploded and the cream inside made the road an icky, sticky mess.
The men collected the remains of the delicious egg in buckets and took it home to eat.
The Bad Egg by Reuben
Once upon a time there was a little boy called Philly he was very fat. One day Philly went outside to play in his backyard and found a giant chocolate brown egg waiting for him. “I’m so stupid I knew I shouldn't have planted those magic beans” said Philly.
Suddenly, Philly heard a voice in his head. “Take a bite I know you want to.”
“OK,” said Philly. Philly took a bite out of the Juicy egg. “Yum!”
Disaster! Lava started pouring out of the egg which formed a brown monster.
“ I’m such an egg!” cried Philly as he died.
The Egg Disaster by Sofia
“Hurry up you're going to be late for school Amika” shouted Mum.
Amika ran downstairs in a rush to get the bus. “Bye Mum”
As Amika almost reached school she saw roadworks and they were surrounding a big egg!
“Wow that’s an awesome egg!” Exclaimed Danny.
“With only three road workers at it,” Amika said.
As the bus drove away they wondered what had happened and how the egg had got there.
On the drive home, the egg had disappeared. “Oh I wish the egg was still there,” Danny complained
“At least it didn’t leave a big mess” Amika replied.
The Giant Egg by Troy
One sunny day In New York, Ryan was choosing his birthday cake, for his part that was going to be in 1 week.
“So Ryan what cake are you going to have for your birthday party”? Asked Ryan's mum “well could I have a giant creamy egg with its top crackt off, then let the creamy stuff inside run out then put toy work men and cones”. “Ok I'll make that cake for you”. Replide his mum.
A week later it was Ryan's birthday party and when Ryan's mum brought out his cake it was exactly as he'd imagined it.
The Strange Egg by Keagan
Long ago there were three builders. They started to build a gigantic pool for a customer. It took a while to but they didn’t give up until something unusual happened...
One sunny day a few weeks into the build, they found an enormous chocolate egg that had been there for thousands of years. For some reason the chocolate egg started to break, all the yolk was coming out. “It smells revolting!” yelled Alan. But despite the stench, the builders wanted to investigate, so they put on gas masks and approached slowly.
Unfortunately the gas was poisonous and they all died!
Emergency Egg by Eva S
One day in New York there was a call from inside the Brad the builder shop. A scientist was asking 3 builders to be shrunk with some tools to fix A CHOCOLATE EGG. Of course they said yes and they would be there.
2 hours past and they were geared up and ready to get shrunk but daster struck as the scientist cat Lopsy jumped on the lever and it went to bird size and then the engine gave a grunt and it whirled into action as it did a beam of light shined down and then…..
The Deadly Egg by Zara
One day in a big mansion there were three builders Rose, Grace and Lily. The boss had told them that they had to find resources for the new building in town which never ever got built.
While they were in the mansion they found a big choco egg. They walked up to it and the egg yelled, “Why do you enter my domain?”
Rose said shyly “We do not mean any harm we just need some wood.”
He looked at them and said ”Haha” and he ate them.
He and the girls were never seen again.
The Egg by Morag
One lovely Summer's morning when I was walking down the road, I suddenly hit something hard and fell back with a bump.
I looked down and saw a tiny little egg with its insides gushing out onto the concrete, it also appeared that there were three little men in orange vests, dressed as workers. They had put tiny orange cones around the egg. It really was the most peculiar site!
I stretched my hand out and felt around and eventually I hit a hard but smooth surface, it was as though there was an invisible barrier protecting the little scene.
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