Wednesday, June 6, 2018

Alien’s Revenge by Micah

Micah woke up from a crash noise in the space station. He walked to the noise as he walked there he saw a daffodil growing. Accidentally he walked into the huge observatory. Weirdly he saw someone sprinkled salt on his food. Yuk! so he got out of the observatory. Suddenly he heard a noise on top of him he slowly looked up a alien fell down next to him so he ran as fast as the Flash across the long pink bridge. The alien followed Micah. He saw the alien catching up to him. he turned left and the alien fell down a big hole.
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7 comments:

  1. Mr McDJune 9, 2018 at 4:47 PM

    Science fiction is growing on me Micah good job! That is one fast scary alien if it can run as fast as the flash! Spooky stuff

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  2. AnonymousJune 9, 2018 at 6:52 PM

    Nice use of the third person, Micah! Don't forget to read your story aloud to yourself and add in some punctuation when you pause or take a breath.

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  3. AnonymousJune 13, 2018 at 4:30 PM

    coolstory

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  4. AnonymousJune 13, 2018 at 4:34 PM

    Thanks everyone :) by Micah

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  5. AnonymousJune 13, 2018 at 4:34 PM

    ;)

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  6. AnonymousJune 13, 2018 at 4:38 PM

    Good job Micah

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  7. AnonymousJune 13, 2018 at 4:50 PM

    I bet you love aliens and space.

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