Micah woke up from a crash noise in the space station. He walked to the noise as he walked there he saw a daffodil growing. Accidentally he walked into the huge observatory. Weirdly he saw someone sprinkled salt on his food. Yuk! so he got out of the observatory. Suddenly he heard a noise on top of him he slowly looked up a alien fell down next to him so he ran as fast as the Flash across the long pink bridge. The alien followed Micah. He saw the alien catching up to him. he turned left and the alien fell down a big hole.
Great first attempt at the 100 Word Challenge.
ReplyDeleteI like that you have chosen an unusual setting for your story. Good use of language, especially the various adverbs you have used to start sentences: Accidentally, weirdly, suddenly. I also like the simile 'fast as the Flash'.
We worked together on making sure all of the ideas in your head were clearly conveyed to your reader. Think about that next time you write.
Science fiction is growing on me Micah good job! That is one fast scary alien if it can run as fast as the flash! Spooky stuff
ReplyDeleteNice use of the third person, Micah! Don't forget to read your story aloud to yourself and add in some punctuation when you pause or take a breath.
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ReplyDeleteThanks everyone :) by Micah
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ReplyDeleteGood job Micah
ReplyDeleteI bet you love aliens and space.
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