Wednesday, June 6, 2018

Pink Pusheen by Amberley

One day Pink Pusheen was on the way to the castle. “It has sprinkled down with rain” She said, but it rained huge pink daffodils! Pink Pusheen was camouflaged in the pink daffodils. She saw the huge castle and took a foot step. Pink Pusheen rubbed her eyes. She thought she was dreaming. Then Pink Pusheen saw a huge bridge with a moat under it. Pink Pusheen walked on the huge bridge to the castle. She walked to the castle and shouted “HEY!”  Alll she could hear was her own echo, but someone was in the castle. They were hiding.
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3 comments:

  1. Mr McDJune 9, 2018 at 4:46 PM

    Good story Amberley. I must admit I had to google 'Pusheen', very cute. The idea of Pusheen hiding in the daffodils is quite magical and made even more so with the castle.

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  2. AnonymousJune 9, 2018 at 6:57 PM

    Wow! What a suspenseful ending. I'd love to find out what happens next! Who could be in the castle?

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  3. Toby StokesJune 10, 2018 at 2:36 PM

    Hi Amberley, I really liked the use of the work camouflaged in your story! It helped to build a really detailed picture in my head.

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