Saturday, April 8, 2017

100 Words by Ilja


Let me tell you a story. Once upon a time there was a little girl named (defiantly not Toby) Susan. Now Susan wasn’t an  ordinary girl she longed for adventure. So one day Susan left home to have an adventure. Now this was no ordinary adventure. She wanted to go to the wall. Now for the people reading this that don’t know what the wall is, you'll soon find out. Susan had to pack. When Susan had finished packing she said goodbye and left. Now when she finally got there the wall swallowed her whole! No-one ever saw her again.
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1 comment:

  1. UnknownApril 8, 2017 at 4:57 PM

    Cool story Ilja! I like the idea of the wall swallowing her whole, it's very intriguing and makes me want to know more.

    Watch out for using the same word too many times (now).

    Fabulous work.

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