Wednesday, November 8, 2017

Ghost Village by Chiaki

Once there was a village in London. In 2007 I went to London I got there 8 o'clock in the night. I walked around this spooky old city I asked a man “is there any apartment’s here?” The guy replied

“are you stupid there are no apartment’s here.” I smacked my face because I saw the guy fly away and went through a rusty wall. I ran and I realized I was  becoming a GHOST!!!!! I was panicking and a few years I got used to It and I was more happier because I got used to it.
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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousNovember 12, 2017 at 8:13 AM

    Are you still ghostly, Chiaki? I can see some advantages to this but not many! Don't forget to read through your writing with a buddy, looking for improvements and edits.
    Keep writing!
    From Steven Hales - Stiffkey, Norfolk, England, UK - #TEAM100wc

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