Monday, November 13, 2017

Ivy and Bethan's 100WC

Digging like desperate moles, Robert, Joseph and Tracey were determined to find out what was behind the mysterious red construction tape.

After hours of pointless digging the trio realised they had got it all wrong, the fortune wasn't buried in the ground, it was the ground. Flakes of gold covered the ground like a blanket “ But where would we hide it all?”  Tracey asked, “ No where” replied Joseph “we will just cover it in fake dirt and no one will know!”

And that’s what they did, to this very day the precious golden dirt sits there waiting to be discovered.             
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1 comment:

  1. Ghaya, Edinburgh, UK, 100WCNovember 25, 2017 at 3:30 PM

    Hi Ivy and Bethan,

    This is a really lovely piece. There are some great descriptive words and phrases that you have used. Keep up the good work!

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