Saturday, April 8, 2017

Jack and his very bad morning by Logan


On Monday a boy named Jack was getting ready for school. He left the house and headed for the train. Getting on the train and got his ticket out of his bag. Then he looked out the window “STOP THE TRAIN!” jack shouted. Jack saw a great big asteroid heading towards the train. Screeeech! The train put on the breaks straight away. Jack got out of the train. BOOM! A giant robot came out of the crater and grabbed jack and took him away without his bag and the giant robot lifted off into space never to bee seen again
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1 comment:

  1. BrianApril 8, 2017 at 5:17 PM

    Great story Logan. So Jacks very bad morning turned into?

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