Wednesday, September 20, 2017

Georgia's 100wc

You fall underground. You don’t remember anything. You don’t know who you are or where you live. All that runs through your mind is, “I’m determined. I must carry on.” You walk forward. You don’t make contact with anything. You don’t talk or touch anything.

You have reached something you cannot pass. A legendary barrier. You decide to go back and befriend everything. It may change your destiny. It does. You gain the power to reset everything. You do. You “play” again differently. Now you know, your name is ____! The barrier shattered into colourful balls. You’re now free, ____!

1 comment:

  1. Georgia, your use of second person is really effective here, pulling the reader into your story and letting them use their imagination about the events of the game. The "legendary barrier" sounds interesting!

    Mrs Dolton (Team 100) Berkshire UK


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