Wednesday, November 22, 2017

The Grim Reaper by Lukas

One day me and my friend Jeff went to the park. We were playing football until things got creepy. A guy came up to us and we heard whispers.   
We ran to the forest and we saw a red thing in the bushes it looked like a nose a clown's nose we looked behind us and there was a clown he said “you took my nose so I can have yours”   “RUN”!!!!! I shouted  we ran as fast as we could until georgie appeared and said “you float to” and pennywise killed Jeff. I ran and  had no place to go I was trapped with the grim reaper.
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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousNovember 26, 2017 at 8:33 AM

    Hey Lukas

    Cool writing which needs a little attention to editing. Remeber capital letters for names and those full stops in the correct place.

    Keep writing!

    Steven Hales - Stiffkey, Norfolk, England - #Team100wc

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