Wednesday, November 22, 2017

The Shadower by Jake

  “Wow look at that” I exclaimed.

“It’s spooky” said my friend. When suddenly the mysterious cloaked figure  started to move. “Ahhhhhhh it moved” screamed my friend. Then suddenly the figure started to move towards us. “Run” I screamed. But before I could muster another word the cloaked figure was upon me. He quickly but swiftly moved his hand over my mouth so I couldn't speak. Suddenly I heard a sound “ bedo bedo” yes I'm saved I thought in my head. Then suddenly the cloaked figure left me and ran for the woods. The police pulled up and took me home.
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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousNovember 26, 2017 at 8:36 AM

    Hey Jake!

    Interesting and spooky writing! Good use of direct speech punctuation! The ending doesn't always have to be about 'home'!

    Keep writing!

    Steven Hales - Stiffkey, Norfolk, England - #Team100wc

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