One day I was walking along simpson street when my friend reuben said “should we go to the haunted house. apparently there's a ghost called jeff who haunts the house” “ok” I said. So we walked to the haunted house it took two hours of walking when we got there i said “ i dare you to go inside the haunted house” “ok” said reuben. Reuben walked into the house drip, drip it was slime. When reuben went in the house he looked up and he saw a hole through the roof as the slime dripped through then reuben heard a howling noise. “Death awaits!!!......”
Hi Jake. On your Google Doc this was in a great font suitable for the subject, unfortunately it won't work on the blog and your dripping slime doesn't show. I like the content of your story and the 'drip, drip' of the slime.
ReplyDeleteNext time pay attention to making sure proper nouns like 'Reuben' and 'Simpson Street' start with capital letters.