Saturday, May 6, 2017

The Booger Meltdown by Risha H

Vandan was sitting on his bed quietly reading. His wall started to MELT,  later it turned to slime and got hard, a few more minutes later it turned into a chair. Vandan quickly got a jar and put some slime in it, he ran to a famous lab owned by a man named “ Leonardo Da Vinci”, he showed Leonard “ Hmm, this seems like some type of..Snot! This is amazing I’ll lock this up and make chairs with it!”. In the meantime Leonardo created a bottle and put the slime in it, the slime dripped through the bottle and they all turned into chairs!!!!
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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousMay 6, 2017 at 2:38 PM

    A very original idea Risha! Good control of sentences and sentence punctuation. I also like the way you are using adverbs to add detail.
    Next time remember the new speaker, new line rule.

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