Saturday, May 6, 2017

The Murder Mystery by Troy

I was walking through the long driveway to the apparently haunted house. When I went in the apparently haunted house I was very surprised to see the body of Flynn lying on the floor dead. What I didn't know was that Flynn wasn't dead he was the person that haunted the house. Five minutes later I went to the front of the house and Flynn’s body was gone. Then I heard a creaking sound “it’s Flynn he’s the only other person here” I thought. Suddenly there was a strong scent of acid slime then the slime dripped through the ceiling and onto my head.
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1 comment:

  1. Louise GMay 6, 2017 at 3:59 PM

    What a cliffhanger! This is a very controlled piece of writing Troy. You have made good language choices and linked your ideas with time connectives. Good work.

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