Saturday, May 6, 2017

The Slime Monster by Ilja

Have you heard about the experiment that badly wrong? Well if you haven’t stick around, and if you have then how about hearing it again? So there was a girl called Madison. Now Madison decided to make a… GIANT BUNNY! But it went badly wrong. “AHHHHHHHH!” Madison screamed, as her bunny exploded and out came a big blob of slime! She ran downstairs to the broom closet. But the slime dripped through! The roof cracked and the slime jumped down! “AHHHHHHHH! It’s Henry!” Madison screamed. “My name is BOB!” The slime screamed back. “I SHALL KILL YOU!” Bob screamed. No-one ever saw her again.  
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1 comment:

  1. Louise GMay 6, 2017 at 6:07 PM

    What a terribly thing to happen to the poor bunny.... and of course, to Madison too! Well done, you have shown great use of punctuation and controlled your ideas throughout.

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