Wednesday, November 1, 2017

100WC Kael & Richie

Suddenly as Sam entered the colour changing room, it turned white. Sam ,as elegant as a lion, prowled through the room looking for some flame to light a fire.  He entered another room filled with water, he started swimming. However Sam needed to get to his grandfather's house by tomorrow. Soon after, Sam pulled himself out of the water and onto the dry wasteland. Happily, he ran to his grandfather's house as he neared the gate. He dashed into the house but, unfortunately his grandfather was sleeping. 2 or 3 Minutes later his grandfather woke up and celebrated his birthday.
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1 comment:

  1. MollyNovember 5, 2017 at 8:31 AM

    Hi guys, I think the structure of this story could be better as it is a bit confusing.

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