Wednesday, November 1, 2017

Ben's 100WC

I woke up, today was the day of white. A day that happens once every 1248 days (2 years). I walked over to the window and saw the magenta sky fading into white. I ran outside we celebrated a new year. The 7 suns had aligned to mark the start of a new year. Then suddenly flames started swimming towards the town from out the hills. The whole town caught fire everyone was screaming then the sky turned red. No one new why there was no red day after the flames were extinguished I knew there would be no tomorrow...
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1 comment:

  1. MollyNovember 5, 2017 at 8:37 AM

    Really nice description, I like that you used your 100 words to just focus on setting the scene- its a really effective way to use such a small amount of words.

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